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"Wake up!" As the pegasus regains consciousness he hears the voice calling out to him. "Wake up!" Suddenly the pegasus is awaken by the mysterious voice that seems to fill the void of this unknown destination. He begins to realize that the floor is filled with water and a blanket of fog covers the entire area.

"It's about time you woke up." The startled pegasus's eyes focused on the faint figure closing in where he is standing. "Stay back! That's far enough!" The mysterious figure starts to chuckle as it gets closer. "Final warning!" said the frightened pegasus. Right before the mysterious figure took another step the pegasus starts to charge towards the mysterious figure standing before him. Right before the pegasus got any closer, a glare from the mysterious figure eyes pierced through the thick fog making the colt freeze in mid-air.

"Why can't I move!?" Then the fog starts to fade away reveling the identity of the mysterious figure right before him. The pegasus stared in shock as he witness what appears to be a white Alicorn with red highlights in his black mane and blood red eyes with dark designs around his eyes, they are unlike anything he's ever seen before.

"Do not be afraid, Sunny" said the mysterious alicorn. "Wh-who are you!? And h-how do y-you know my name!?" Sunny struggled to replied. Suddenly the alicorns horn lights up releasing Sunny from his frozen stasis dropping him to the ground. "My name is Purgatory, spirit of the after life, watcher over the living and dead; keeper of damned souls." Purgatory replied with a booming voice.

Soon Sunny starts to realized that he's not standing on the beautiful grasslands of Equestria anymore, there are no sounds from what Sunny can hear but yet he can feel the presence of ponies around him. "What is this place?" said the confused pegasus. Purgatory looks around and replies, "Welcome to Limbo, Sunny. I'm most certain you won't find our commendations to your liking."
The beginning of the story I promised. It was revised some time ago by :iconredbluteam: Finally got it up. This is only the beginning...

The chapters are going to be much longer I asure you. Don't stop reading on me now XD

Featuring :iconredbluteam: 's OC Purgatory

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]

All rights go to :iconfyre-flye: for MLP
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TheRedHeavyTwin Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thnk :iconredbluteam: He revised it a while back :P
yay fore back story and friends helping
TheRedHeavyTwin Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol indeed :iconsherlockholmesplz:
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